Friday, August 5, 2011

FFF: Strangled Cry

(Photo provided by Lexi; original source unknown)
80-160 words
"...strangled cry..."
The season was changing and with it came a strong desire to go shopping. You wanted more variety in your closet – something warm and comfortable to slip into as the oppressive heat gives way to the chill of the night. You shop alone. You prefer it this way—allowing your thoughts wander, clearing your head.

You don’t realize that I’ve followed you. I want to surprise you, and I know how you’ve fantasized about fucking me somewhere private and yet also so very public. You slip into the dressing room to try on a few items. You’ve already begun to undress when I quietly slip in behind you.

Your startled, strangled cry is of delight as you immediately sense my presence – almost as if you were expecting me. You waste no time. Reaching behind you, my jeans join yours on the floor and my cock springs to life. I grab your gorgeous tits – fucking you quietly, intoxicatingly.



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11 comments:

  1. The dressing room surprise sex is a great theme - nice piece!
    Give us more, Lola, third person or first person as you choose...

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  2. Years ago she invited me into the VS dressing room with her, no touching, but watching her try on things to my delight and frustration. You give wonderful voice to the last part of that fantasy.... Excellent work.

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  3. A delightful offering. I love the voyeurism combined with the surprise sex. Thanks!

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  4. A delightful offering. I love the voyeurism combined with the surprise sex. Thanks!

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  5. The dressing room surprise sex is a great theme - nice piece!
    Give us more, Lola, third person or first person as you choose...

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  6. Thank you! When you say "give us more," did you mean a continuation of this story or more frequent participation in FFF? :)

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  7. Thanks! I'm sure the VS dressing room was indeed frustrating.

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  8. Thanks, Word! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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  9. Great minds think alike in terms of dressing rooms, but this was completely your own take on that theme, and of course it was great.  It gives a whole new angle to dressing room sex.

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  10. I enjoyed the voyeuristic stalker/lover images this gave me.  

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  11. Oh man, it was really going the way of stalker when I was writing, so I had to change a few things to make it more lover (hopefully) than stalker.

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