Friday, February 3, 2012

FFF - Crystalline

85-105 words

He saw her enter from across the room. She was gorgeous – enveloped in a pink, crystalline haze. The room lit up instantly and heads turned to follow her.

Her head held high, she carried that look of superiority.

He loved seeing her in this element. He wanted to fuck her - especially after seeing her at a party like this. Eyes following her as she sauntered around the room, she became irresistible.

He walked up to her, kissing her on the cheeks. After the second kiss, he whispered in her ear, “I can’t wait to slip into you after this.”

She laughed gently, blushing subtly.

Total words: 104

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  1. This brings a whole new meaning to "slipping into something comfortable"!!! Nicely done.

  2. A very exciting interpretation of the prompt, and a very vivid and sexy story!


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