Friday, February 24, 2012

FFF - Two for One

Well, many of you might already know that PB over at Insatiabear wasn't able to challenge us with an FFF this week, so both Max and Ram the Sunlover posted challenges on their sites. Friday is nearly over, so I'm a little late to the game this week, but I figured I'd give both challenges a shot.

First up, Max provided us with this picture/challenge.

Either 50-55 words OR 200-210 words
No challenge phrase

Play me a song.
Let me hear you sing.
Open your heart to me.
Your voice is like honey.
When you sing, I want to lick you all over.

Play me a song.
Let me watch you.
Your fingers glide over the guitar strings.
You are beautiful.
I could watch and listen all night long.


Next up, Ram the Sunlover gave us the following picture/challenge.

144-188 words
...subtle perfidy...

“I’m not sure about this.”
“But it’s what we both want. What we’ve both wanted for so long.”
“I know, I know. It’s just…”

He kisses her shoulder. Her neck.
Draws his finger down along her arm.
He pulls her close to him.
He unbuttons her dress and watches it fall into a pool at her feet.
Her bra drops to the floor, and she is left standing in her panties and garter.

“I love you.”

She blushes slightly.
She wants him. So much.
His dark brown hair. His ripped abs.
That gorgeous cock.
So ready to be used.

“I love you.”

Collecting herself, she turns to gaze into his eyes.
Rub her hands over every inch of his hard body.
He is perfect.

But there is a subtle perfidy to what they were doing.
They’d wanted it for so long, but there were circumstances.
People who would doubt their love.

None of that mattered now.
She was wet; he was hard.
All further thoughts fled from her mind as she slowly guided her wet cunt down onto his waiting cock.


  1. The piece you wrote for the first prompt is sexy and a very fitting accompaniment for the image.

    The story is vivid and intense, and you make every word count. You have a finely-tuned ear when it comes to dialogue, and your attention to detail is apparent. The dance of the two characters culminates in an erotic fashion, leaving the reader hungry for more.

    1. Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) I really appreciate such great feedback.

  2. Worth the wait!
    I enjoyed both pieces, thanks for playing this week.

    1. Thanks for choosing such a great picture! :)


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