Friday, December 7, 2012

FFF - Surprise!

It's time again for another Flash Fiction Friday! (yes, two weeks in a row for me!) Advizor has taken the hosting reins. This week's challenge is to use the image below, using the word decision. The word limit is 150 words (or 300, if you want extra credit by writing from both perspectives). Double bonus if you write the post without the word fuck.


He wanted to be mad at her. He wanted to feel hurt and betrayed, but hell if she wasn’t so damn sexy. Plus, she looked a little remorseful, right?

He’d returned home from a business trip earlier than expected. He’d hoped to surprise her, but the surprise was his. He’d found her in their bedroom. With Angie and Tom. The three of them were entangled, and he was shocked.

Trying to sort out his feelings, he slipped out into the hallway.

Oh shit! He wasn’t supposed to be home until tomorrow. She’d seen him enter the bedroom and then quickly leave – a look of confusion on his face. She slipped out of the entanglement to join him in the hallway.

She didn’t know what to say. She knew he’d want some space, but she wanted him to know she was there whenever he was ready to talk.

Angie and Tom barely noticed that she’d slipped away; they continued in their frenzy – clueless to the brewing tension just outside the bedroom. Their moans just got louder, making it that much more difficult to be upset.

He looked down at his gorgeous wife once more. I should be furious, right? But staring at his lovely wife, and listening to the heat in the next room, the decision was easy – all he wanted was to get her back into that bedroom.

She took his hand when he extended it to her and allowed herself to be pulled into his embrace. He kissed her hard and whispered, “I see you’ve been a naughty girl while I was away. Your punishment will come later. First, we shall finish what you started.”

She quickly helped him out of his suit, leaving it on the hallway floor before rejoining the other couple.


19 comments:

  1. Excellent job! I must admit, were it me in his shoes I'd have a difficult time being upset. Quite the contrary, actually; I'd probably admire my wife's initiative.

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  2. Yes, a very naughty girl. :-) Nice take on this pic!

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  3. Very nice, how can you be upset with such a sweet and lovely girl.

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  4. Lola! Fabulous take! So fun FFFing with you!

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    1. Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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  5. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PLAYING!!!

    I love the power of the off-screen characters, the pull to leave the hallway and get back a scene we can't even see! What a fun take. Excellent job!

    Also: I've added a link to your story to my original post. I hope to have the link collector working by next week.

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    1. Thanks for hosting. It was fun! At first I didn't really know what to do with the pic, but then this scenario just started flowing. Yay!

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  6. Excellent, really a nice take on the photo

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    1. Thanks, Pirate! I'm really glad you liked it. :)

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  7. Interesting. I get the sense that we have a clash of generations. Perhaps she of the younger generation views sex as play. Her three-some is just kind of like hanging out. Her older husband is a little more traditional and struggling with the infidelity that perhaps is not really infidelity. In the end he knows she loves him. I like the paradox.

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    1. Thanks, Ryan. I hadn't really thought about the generations thing, but I like it.

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  8. Great take on the prompt. Love the "naughty" aspects, and the fact that he did undress and fall into bed with the rest of the group.

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