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Sarah leaned her head forward with a twinkle in her eye and a mischievous smile on her face. With the slightest shake of her head, she sprinkled his chest with the water from her dripping wet hair. Ethan just laughed and threw his head back in sheer pleasure. He enjoyed seeing her like this so - happy, so alive.
He reached up, wrapping his fingers through her wet hair, pulling her down. He whispered in her ear, “I’m enveloped in warmth whenever I’m near you.”
“Even when I do this?” She giggled as she shook her head again.
Laughing again, he pulled her down tight and wrapped her in his arms. “Oh, yes! Especially when you do that.”
Hi Lola. Nice take on this pic. Nothing like a nice bathtub romp, huh? :-)
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Happy FFF!
I really liked this. It captures the personality of my current relationship.
ReplyDelete“I’m enveloped in warmth whenever I’m near you.” ... *melt*
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After the darkness of the last couple weeks I was very happy to see warm lighthearted stuff from so many people this week. I was hoping it'd turn out that way, and yours was a good example.
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-- PB
This made me smile for reasons I can't explain. :)
ReplyDeleteI love that pic, but in my head I'm making her blonder.
after reading your words the picture became very erotic.... sexy
ReplyDeleteThis is nice, light, funny, happy, care free, you know, a fiction piece. We need that once in a while. Good job
ReplyDeleteMax, Thanks! Oh, and I'm all linked up over on Panser's page. :)
ReplyDeleteHEDONE, Glad I could *melt* you, but even happier that this describes your current relationship! That's exciting.
Panser, Thank you! I'm so much better/motivated/inspired to write happy than dark. Thanks for a great challenge photo.
foxy, That the best reason to smile, but I'm curious why you're making her blonder...
H, That's so fantastic to hear that my words helped make the picture a little more erotic. :)
Advizor54, Thanks for your seal of approval. :-*
Well done! Love the head shake water drops.
ReplyDeleteThis was nice because it didn't concentrate on the action zones. All too often, smut spends all its time on cock into pussy shove shove shove, when in reality it's the little things that make the scene real. These characters were real. Personal experience showing through, or just brilliant writing in general :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, wordwytch!!
ReplyDeleteLexi, I guess I'll have to go with brilliant writing :)), as I've never experienced the scenario I've described above. I'm glad you liked it.
So light and playful! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteYour story is lovely, light, funny... And I loved the way you used the phrase!
ReplyDeleteFrance and R, Thanks!! I'm glad you both liked it. :)
ReplyDeleteFrance and R, Thanks!! I'm glad you both liked it. :)
ReplyDeleteYour story is lovely, light, funny... And I loved the way you used the phrase!
ReplyDeleteSo light and playful! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteMax, Thanks! Oh, and I'm all linked up over on Panser's page. :)
ReplyDeleteHEDONE, Glad I could *melt* you, but even happier that this describes your current relationship! That's exciting.
Panser, Thank you! I'm so much better/motivated/inspired to write happy than dark. Thanks for a great challenge photo.
foxy, That the best reason to smile, but I'm curious why you're making her blonder...
H, That's so fantastic to hear that my words helped make the picture a little more erotic. :)
Advizor54, Thanks for your seal of approval. :-*
This is nice, light, funny, happy, care free, you know, a fiction piece. We need that once in a while. Good job
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